Sunday, October 6, 2013

The Word-Picture

The smell is completely odorless. When it is in your hand, it may feel warm such as clothes from the dryer. Sometimes it feels cool like the weather. It’s texture is smooth as a baby’s bottom, but can be rough as a rock. It portrays simplicity within it's colors. The sight of it may make you want to jump up and down in joyfulness, or make you want to cry. It may be seen more than once within a lifetime. You can hear it being teared from the treasury. The agonizing sound of it as it is being destroyed in someone’s hand; the never ending crumbling and being thrown across the room. Sometimes it is left in a certain area until it piles up.  

1 comment:

  1. You describe what the object does more than you describe the object itself. Not very clear because of that.
    mm

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